The Legend
By Josh Watkins
There is a man who is tall,
He is proud, strong, daring,
and stands above all.
He has long golden hair that
flows down his back,
His feet are firm and planted
on track.
His eyes are a deep sea blue,
His face is fair and his
heart is true.
He wears a vest of leather
hide,
And on his feet sandals of
steel ride.
Slung over his back is a
mighty sword,
Many a foes’ blood by it has
been poured.
On his cheek He bears a
glowing star-shaped scar,
That was carved by a
rainbow-colored shooting star.
Many a sunset He is found,
Standing on a cliff,
overlooking the valley to where he is bound.
He rides a steed all dressed
in white,
That gives any nightly
creature a fright.
When duty calls, He leaves
his cozy lair,
To go strike down foes here,
there, and everywhere.
On one dark and stormy night,
He will make his final
flight.
He and his men march through
the rain, up Inferno Hill,
Where stands a million dark
soldiers waiting for their kill.
He draws his sword and points
it towards the sky,
And with a shout he says “It’s
a good day to die!”
“We fight to the end!” his
loyal soldiers cry,
As the dark fire lights up
the midnight sky.
The greatest battle of all
time is about to be fought,
The glory of victory is what
is sought.
He then got the gleam of
victory in his eye,
And before he knew it his
feet began to fly.
Dark arrows began to whiz by
his head,
And some of his brave men hit
the ground dead.
He leaps through the air
feeling so alive,
One swing from his sword cuts
100 from their collective hive.
He hits his marks blow after
blow,
Down underground, more and
more dark warriors go.
The dark spirits’ eyes lit up
with green fire,
Up from the ground arose
flaming funeral pyres.
In the pyres were the ghostly
forms of the men who fell,
His heart burned with anger
towards this demonic spell.
He charged forward swinging
the sword with all of his might,
Thousands of dark soldiers
did he smite.
He mows down the demons in a
straight course,
Making his way towards their
power to destroy the source.
With a swift swing of his
magical blade,
He has reached the master
shade.
The sky lights up once more,
As a clash of metal and magic
could end this long war.
A fiery explosion is heard
all around,
As He and the shade are back
to back in uneven ground.
The evil shade suddenly
bursts into a green ball of smoke,
All that was left was a
cloak.
He gave a big smile and a lengthy
grin,
Then he lifted his sword high
above his chin,
He cried “Freedom reigns
throughout this land!”
Then fell face down in the
sand.
The dark soldiers vanished
without a trace,
Never again to return to this
place.
For the man, many soldiers
honorably fought,
For by his blood their
freedom was bought.
The place where He took his
fall,
Is where He is known as the
Legend to all.
I have a lot to say about this one and hopefully I can explain it well enough to fit all my thoughts in and intrigue y'all.
My inspiration here came from when I was in a phase of watching war movies and going through Greek Mythology. I wanted to create my own hero with relevance to the movie Troy, mythology, Braveheart, and yes, the Bible.
The Troy reference is the flowing hair, the funeral pyres, and the battle. Braveheart is semi-referenced when the hero says his freedom line before he dies. And the Bible reference (even though this hero is nowhere close to Jesus) is this hero's death for the freedom of his people.
For you critical readers, you will once again notice A) Inconsistent capitalization and B) Present tense and Past tense intermingled (again with the inconsistency). Be warned, these things will most likely appear in later released pieces.
Oh and in the beginning when his features are described, I find it strange that the shooting star that gave him his scar was rainbow colored...it kinda takes away some manliness and fearsome aspects from him. O well, the pen shall have its way soon enough.
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